Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Sunday, 7 August 2016
Thursday, 16 June 2016
Our writing
In Ruma Kiwi we have been working on our explanation writing. We did animal writing, if I could be a animal for a week I would be.... I did a dolphin but there were lots of other awesome animals that the children of Ruma Kiwi did. I enjoyed this because I like art and Miss Collins let us do art with our writing.
By Hunter
Sunday, 12 June 2016
How to make the Boys's Delicious Cornflake Crumble
Read the instructions that Clark, Jack and Jakab have created. Please leave the boys a comment.
Matariki Instrustional Writing Investiagtion
Click on the link below to watch the fabulous Matariki Instructional iMovie that has been created by Carter, Georgiana, Hunter, Lachlan and Levi. Let us know what you think about their tasty chocolate treats.
How to make raw blueberry tarts.
Chiara, Freya, Paris, Reagan and Ruby worked together to create well presented and tasty 'Raw Blueberry Tartlets' for the Matariki Celebration. The girls have created an iMovie to show there learning journey. Please leave the girls a comment.
Paris's Instructional Writing
Click on the book below and read through Paris's set of instructions. Please let us know what you think.
Wednesday, 13 April 2016
Hunters Tanka Poem
A tanka poem is a poem with 31 syllables in the patten of 5,7,5,7,7. They have to do with something negitive or positive that left a mark in your life. Here is mine.
My Happy Place
Landing the plane, yay
Warm, friendly, the best place here
Go to the villa
Jump in the freezing cold pool
Bali, always love it here
By Hunter
Tuesday, 12 April 2016
Lachlans haiku poem
Trees
Trees blow in the wind
Braches come off by the month
Leaves fall off them too
Georgianas haiku poem
AUTUMN
Leaves are falling down
Leaves are different colours
The wind is moving
WINTER
The ground is snowy
Snow flakes are so beautiful
Porridge warms me up
By Georgiana
Hunters haiku poem
DOLPHINS
Tricks underwater
Swimming smoothly in the pod
Chasing boat motors
KITTENS
Kittens chase yarn balls
Kittens are very friendly
Kittens are so soft
MONKEYS
Monkeys swing off trees
Monkeys live in the jungle
Monkeys are cheeky
These are haiku poems. Haiku poems pattern uses syllables. In the first line There is 5, In the second line there is 7 and in the third line there is 5 again.
By Hunter
Haiku poems
Trees have heavy roots
Some are native in NZ
Growing really tall.
Some are native in NZ
Growing really tall.
Ocean
Waves are very rough
Tide can come in very far
The water is cold.
Waves are very rough
Tide can come in very far
The water is cold.
Dylan's haiku poems
Trees
They are powerful
They can grow to be very big
They have long branches
Ocean
The waves are very rough
The tide can come in very far
The water is cold
Murdoch's haiku poems
What do you think of them
The gorilla
Hairy and muscly
A very strong animal
Scary and angry
Trees
Bushy and leafy
Swaying from side to side
Tall also steady
Write what you think of them on the comments please
Monday, 11 April 2016
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